Feedback Indent each paragraph by clicking one time on Tab. 2. In the introduction, develop a real thesis statement (the last sentence of the introductory paragraph). Use descriptive words and state that Twenge warns that teenagers, who spend too much time on the screen, will be feel lonely and depressed. You may add additional descriptive words. 3. Each paragraph should be approximately 1/2 page, with a meaningful supporting quote in the middle. Document the quote in MLA format. See examples for in-text citations (documenting quotes) on page 2 of Organizational Chart. 3. Start each paragraph with a topic sentence stating, "The author's idea that drew my attention was..." or "I found interesting the author's argument that..." Name in your words what shocked or interested you in the article. 4. Then in the first part of each paragraph talk about Twenge's arguments/ideas. In the middle of each paragraph, integrate a quote. After the quote, discuss your own ideas about the author's viewpoint and analyze your own experiences. 5. You may need to divide your paragraph 2 into 2 separate paragraphs. Of course, you should revise and further develop them based on the organization above.

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