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her transitioning --wrong word choice. yet been assessed considering some financial or social hypothesis. This study expects to investigate this short account utilizing Marxism to create different understandings and widens the extent of this monetary and political way of thinking. --this is incoherent. You don't analyse; you make woolly, largely incomprehensibe claims, lacking support.

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