activity you have been writing to demonstrate your synthesis thinking
You have been writing to demonstrate
your synthesis thinking. Writing often
helps us clarify and examine our own thinking. But
this week you will be analyzing and evaluating the
synthesis thinking of someone else's writing. Read the
paragraph below and evaluate the writing for its
synthesis thinking, accuracy of content and writing
style and effectiveness. Your writing should be in a
tone that would help the writer of the provided
paragraph to better understand what is done well and
what could be improved.
Sugar is a critical crop in the human food supply and
has been for centuries. The many, many uses for sugar
in all cultures proves it is critical to all of us. I like lots
of sugary foods and I know others do as well. Sugar
also supplies a lot of energy and that is so important
to feeding people. What other crops supply so much
energy to so many? I think that a food that provides
so much energy in a form that we all love is a key
crop. Sugarcane is like other cereals although most
people don't think of sugarcane as a grass (Wikipedia).
The delicious seeds are very profitable as they can
produce ½ pound of sugar per plant. That makes
sugarcane high yielding. And cuttings can be done a
couple of times each season. Lots of sunshine make
the sugarcane more sweet so sugarcane is grown in
tropical locations (our course). America gets its sugar
Sugar is used all over the world so it must have a wide
adaptation. Sugar is cheap to produce and store. It
can last a long, long time. Some people may say that
we shouldn't promote sugar but that is not a realistic
premise because people will just use other similar
crops and products if we don't produce and use sugar.
Honey is not a good alternative because the bee
population is being damaged. Sugar beets and
molasses are not as well known so they can't compete
with sugar. I also just like sugar better than all the
alternatives. Sugarcane is a key crop and likely to
continue to be as it is a staple.
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