TASK 3: Complete a proof-reading task on the following passage and correct the mistakes you have spotted. For your notice, there are 10 mistakes in the passage of the following kinds: (4 Pts each, 40 Pts in total)

Task 3 11.08.2002 Arwa Al Mouhammed, BA. Medical Assisting Program Director American University of Middle East Egaila, Kuwait Hi, My name is Arwa Al Mouhammed, Medical Assisting Program Director at American University of Middle East, we have met before at different medical assisting events or we have talked on the phone. I am writing to introduce myself (missing comma) and to request permission to speak to the medical assisting students who will be participating in the externship program this semester. If you are a member of the American Association of Medical Assistants, I am sure you are aware that all levels of the AAMA organization offer many resources and networking opportunities for your students. As an officer, I feel it is extremely important to reach out to these potential new members. Introduce them to their professional organization while still a student (subject-verb agreement: introduce the students to their professional organization). We welcome your students to our continuing education unit sessions and encourage them to attend at least one business meeting to see what we are all about (run on). If you are an educator who awards extra credit points to students who attend education sessions, we will provide you with a list of students who attend and a short summary of the topic for verification of attendance. We would also like to add your name to our e-mail/mailing list so that you can receipt (misspelled word: receive) notice of educational opportunities for your students. We realize many of your students are working while attending school and that many are single parents with very limited time. The number gets more higher (comparison: gets higher) every year. That is why we feel it is important that they realized (inaccurate verb tense: realize) that there is a professional organization for them after they are going to graduate and are certified. Please helps (inaccurate verb tense: help) your students get involved now for the networking and education(capitalization: Networking and Education) opportunities. The unit meets on the third Saturday of each month at 10 am. The locations vary, but we attempt to keep travel distance at a minimum (fragment: even though the locations vary, we attempt to keep travel distance at a minimum). Five (5) CEUs are available at each session. A business meeting will follow immediately and your students are encouraged to attend and observe. It is also possible that a CEU session could be held at your school so that your students could have the opportunity to attend. The I look forward to establishing a relationship with your faculty and students and appreciate any assistance you can provide. Please do not hesitate to contact me via (slang acronym: through) email at arwaarwa@aum.edu.kw or by phone at +9655555555. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely Arwa Al Mouhammed, BA. Medical Assisting Program Director REWRITE THE EDITED VERSION WITH HIGHLIGHTED CORRECTIONS BELOW 11.08.2002 Arwa Al Mouhammed, BA. Medical Assisting Program Director American University of Middle East Egaila, Kuwait Hi, My name is Arwa Al Mouhammed, Medical Assisting Program Director at American University of Middle East, we have met before at different medical assisting events or we have talked on the phone. I am writing to introduce myself, and to request permission to speak to the medical assisting students who will be participating in the externship program this semester. If you are a member of the American Association of Medical Assistants, I am sure you are aware that all levels of the AAMA organization offer many resources and networking opportunities for your students. As an officer, I feel it is extremely important to reach out to these potential new members and introduce the students to their professional organization. We welcome your students to our continuing education unit sessions and encourage them to attend at least one business meeting (run on eliminated). If you are an educator who awards extra credit points to students who attend education sessions, we will provide you with a list of students who attend and a short summary of the topic for verification of attendance. We would also like to add your name to our e-mail/mailing list so that you can receive notice of educational opportunities for your students. We realize many of your students are working while attending school and that many are single parents with very limited time. The number gets higher every year. That is why we feel it is important that they realize that there is a professional organization for them after they are going to graduate and are certified. Please help your students get involved now for the Networking and education opportunities. The unit meets on the third Saturday of each month at 10 am. Even though the locations vary, we attempt to keep travel distance at a minimum. Five (5) CEUs are available at each session. A business meeting will follow immediately and your students are encouraged to attend and observe. It is also possible that a CEU session could be held at your school so that your students could have the opportunity to attend. The I look forward to establishing a relationship with your faculty and students, and appreciate any assistance you can provide. Please do not hesitate to contact me through email at arwaarwa@aum.edu.kw or by phone at +9655555555. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely Arwa Al Mouhammed, BA. Medical Assisting Program Director