"Imagine finding yourself in the desert with a sick friend and no way to get him to safety!"

Ahmed thought to himself as he dialled the ambulance. It all started yesterday. A pretty normal

day, really! Well, that's how it started out anyway!

Ahmed and Mubarak decide-had decided to go camping in the desert this weekend because they

haven't hadn't been for a while. They used to go all the time. But, but then Ahmed got his fancy

jebjob, and he was suddenlysuddenly he was too busy.

PLEASE NOTE:

This is a shortened version of what you need to do.

This is to show you how your first draft should look, with the MS Word Review edits.

Remember, your short story must be 600 - 800 words.