INSTRUCTIONS This work is previously done by the tutors, student want to add some words Add 100 - 150 word in body paragraph 1 and 200 words in body paragraph 2 Each paragraph have a conclusion and intext citation Body paragraph 1 and body paragraph 2 are the solutions This is the professor note At this stage, you should have at least the two argument body paragraphs finished. Do not submit the outline, just submit the paragraphs without the outline information. Highlight the evidence. In other words, highlight the information from outside sources. Body paragraph 1 : The need for strict fast food advertising rules is based on overwhelming scientific proof of their contribution to obesity reduction. An important example of the effectiveness of regulatory measures is the 2019 ban on food advertising high in fat, salt, and sugar across the Transport for London network. Thus, the resulting number of 94,867 fewer incidence of obesity indicates that the rates fell by 4.8 percent. It is a direct indicator of the impact advertising has on the public health status, resulting in the immediate necessity for policies to prevent its harmful effects. In addition to decreasing obesity, the effects of these strategies will also result in large health care reductions and important benefits for society. Governments can encourage healthier lifestyle through restricting the advertisement of fast food, which will therefore result in a healthy population with an improved quality of life. Body paragraph 2: Moreover, another compelling argument for imposing tighter measures upon the fast-food advertising concerns its devastating effect on children's eating patterns. As suggested in the works from 'The New Daily' and 'Obesity Evidence Hub', which refer to particular studies concerning the issue, the ads of junk food have been shown to manipulate the vulnerable minds of the youth to accept unhealthy eating practices and thus instil the culture of global obesity. Taking advantage of children's developmental characteristics, the consumerist enterprises develop the associations of fast food as a positive experience, thus increasing the preference and consumption of the same. Seeing as how impactful the commercials are towards children's actual choice, health authorities should exert more rigorous rules in controlling fast food commercials towards a younger target audience to ensure their safety and healthier eating habits.