What do you need to do for this assessment? You are required to write a discursive essay for an academic audience. Your argument should be balanced, representing different views and it should be supported by research. The essay should summarise a contemporary issue and its impact on 21st century society, which is evaluated from different viewpoints with reference to appropriate sources. The aim of this essay is to demonstrate your understanding and ability to evaluate the key considerations relating to a contemporary issue. topic: Discuss whether it is better to be pessimistic or optimistic about the ongoing changes in population. Structure: Overall word count 1000 - 1500 Suggested structure (NB. Section word counts are for guidance only): Introduction (150-300 words) state why the topic is important Briefly define key ideas outline the essay's approach to the topic outline different views presented Main body (650-900 words) key points supported by facts/evidence/examples cite relevant support sources present, synthesise & evaluate different viewpoints The conclusion (200-300 words) summarise main points draw logical conclusion(s)/nA draft of a project is provided you need you to edit it and add 1 in text citation in every paragraph. its 800 words now and you need to extend it to 1300-1500 words. Make sure to provide at least 10 sources as well. Don't use very professional word keep it simple This is the feedback on my 800 word draft You have tried to offer a balanced view of the issue at hand, which is the task required. However, much more research is needed. You need to expand well beyond this attempt and be careful in attributing problems and solutions correctly and meaningfully. Improve: You need to clearly show the connection to your sources: citations are required throughout. Reflect carefully on what conclusions your line of reasoning will lead to, there are some conflating arguments that usually go in opposite directions.

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