Women, Gender, and the Roman Empire

To do: need to make changes in the work as per comments from instructor.

COMMENTS FROM INSTRUCTOR

There are a couple of things that we can do to improve this paper. First you

need to make sure that you have sub headers that clearly organize your

thesis into three main points defending it. Put those sub headers in bold so

they are very clear where one idea starts and one idea ends. Make sure that

all of your citations are in the same format. Also, it would be very important

to make sure that you have your citation for your picture right underneath

the picture.

Western Civilization: Research Paper Content (Part 3 of 5)